Creative Project English

Nikola Tausan

10B

31^st May 2009

English

Mrs. V

Creative Project “Deception Point” by Dan Brown

Screenplay

EXT- Ocean Surface- 12 miles of the coast of New Jersey- just before dawn.

MICHAEL is standing, knee-deep in water, on the engine box of the sinking Triton submersible.

EXTREME CLOSE UP

MICHAEL is terrified and his face expresses an intense panicked and feverish thinking.

MICHAEL TOLLAND

(Frustrated yell)

Think!!! Why is this sub sinking?

QUICK CUT to underwater camera angled at the Tritons ballast tanks.

In frame is MICHAEL’s hand feeling the bullet holes in the tank.

QUICK CUT to EXTREME CLOSE UP of MICHAEL’s face.

A wave of realization comes across his face, yet it brings no relief.

Camera zooms out to a WIDE ANGLE

In the frame MICHAEL swims confidently towards the sub which is three feet under water, and sinking further.

The camera follows MICHAEL as he dives underwater and zooms in on the glass at the front of the Triton.

Camera changes to MICHAEL’S point of view. He is right in front of the dome on the head of the Triton; MICHAEL is watching RACHEL struggle and panic inside the sub.

MICHAEL already holding his breath too long is aching with pain; just before he surfaces he manages to read RACHEL’S lips, she is yelling something about water coming in around the window.

Camera follows MICHAEL from underneath as he is swimming to the surface, sharks and lights are seen above as well as the silhouette of MICHAEL swimming.

QUICK CUT to CLOSE up of MICHAEL’S face when he surfaces. Gasping for air his face shows a brief relief, but then it changes to a hopeful one.

MICHAEL TOLLAND
(excitedly)

The leaking window is the key!

(Break)

What if I increased the pressure inside the sub?

EXTREME CLOSE UP of MICHAEL’S face.

MICHAEL takes three deep breaths and dives quickly into the warm dark water.

QUICK CUT to back of sub where MICHAEL is fidgeting with a large tank of pressurized air.

ZOOM in on the hoses’ as MICHAEL attaches the tank to them.

ZOOM OUT enough to see the stopcock being turned, and the hose going rigid as air pumps through it.

INT- Triton submersible

A very claustrophobic area, with a large see-through dome in front, and right before it, attached to the bottom, a control table with many various levers, buttons and panels.

QUICK CUT to inside the Triton, where RACHEL is obviously in pain as she places her hands over her ears and closes her eyes while pulling her knees up to her chest; a loud hiss of air is heard inside the sub.

CAMERA placed behind RACHEL shows the small compartment in the sub with the glass dome in front. MICHAEL is seen on the other side of the glass, banging and trying to explain to RACHEL how to break out of the sub. RACHEL looks at MICHAEL in a confused manner; while air bubbles are gargling out of his mouth, MICHAEL disappears.

QUICK CUT to RACHEL (whole body is seen)

RACHEL feels like she is going to die alone in a steel crypt. RACHEL has hallucinations of her mother how she encourages her to fight. RACHEL’s face reflects inner combat between the sense of utter despair and a drive to survive.

QUICK CUT to outside the Triton WIDE PANEL view.

Triton slowly lists as the ballast tanks are full.

QUICK CUT to inside the TRITON

RACHEL snaps out of her hallucination as she loses balance and hits the spherical dome, her right shoulder pulses with pain. Suddenly, RACHEL feels a sense of relief as the pressure inside the Triton decreases. RACHEL realizes that the dome is loose as she sees an air bubble escape. QUICK CUT to close up of RACHEL’S face

RACHEL SEXTON

(With comprehension)

The dome is loose!

(Break)

That’s what MICHAEL was trying to tell me!

QUICK CUT TO inside the triton RACHEL and the dome can be seen.

RACHEL throws her weight at the dome with sheer determination to break out, but nothing happens. The air pressure is rising and RACHEL feels a suffocating grip pushing her close to unconsciousness. Hallucinations kick in again. RACHEL hears her mother’s persistent voice uttering, “Fight Rachel, fight…”

QUICK CUT to WIDE PANEL of Triton sub.

The Triton tips backwards slowly.

QUICK CUT inside the Triton

RACHEL slams against the back part of the cockpit, and looks straight up at millions of gallons of water pressing against the glass dome. RACHEL’S face shows a painful grimace as the pressure rises; RACHEL utilizing her last ounce of strength pulls her legs towards her chest, closes her eyes, and takes a deep breath. RACHEL kicks the left side of the leaking dome and water rushes in’ it fills the cockpit in a second.

QUICK CUT to show that RACHEL is out of the Triton and that the Triton is on its one way journey to the bottom of the ocean.

QUICK CUT to sinking Kiowa Chopper

A frame of twisted steel, with a distorted body inside, that succumbed to the pressure of the depth.

QUICK CUT to magma plume

Magma plume glows red as the Kiowa chopper hits it, the Hellfire missiles, already under great pressure, are exposed to the heat and they give way, blowing up. Magma flows up from the plume, and instantly turns water into steam. (This causes the steam to rise and water shoots down only to be turned into steam causing a cycle which slowly creates a whirlpool.)

QUICK CUT to MICHAEL, swimming.

MICHAEL looks for RACHEL down in the dark water, he sees a instant flash that lasts for a second; MICHAEL sees RACHEL and starts swimming towards her.

QUICK CUT to RACHEL

RACHEL starts swimming towards the light she saw. RACHEL is startled by MICHAEL who grabs her by the foot. RACHEL’S face reflects the utter horror, she obviously expects a shark.

MICHAEL pulls RACHEL up towards the surface.

QUICK CUT to close up of RACHEL and MICHAEL’s face.

MICHAEL and RACHEL surface, their faces reveal disbelief that they are still alive. Suddenly, MICHAEL’s face reflects bewilderment.

QUICK CUT to close up of RACHEL’S and MICHAEL’S hands.

Hanging on ever so slightly, MICHAEL loses grip and RACHEL is torn away.

QUICK CUT to wide panel view of entire situation.

RACHEL soars through the air, leaving the water.

QUICK CUT to CLOSE UP MICHAEL’S face.

MICHAEL’S face shows disbelief and fear as he loses RACHEL. MICHAEL looks up and sees a US Coast Guard tilt-rotor airplane, sent upon a report of a explosion out at sea, hoisting RACHEL up into safety. Nearby a Coast Guard diver waves his hands frantically for MICHAEL to swim along.

The Coast Guard diver is dressed in a black diving suit with an orange fluorescent life vest around his torso.

QUICK CUT to under the water.

The whirlpool approaches the surface of the water, and the currents are getting stronger with every passing second.

QUICK CUT to WIDE PANEL view of MICHAEL, COAST GUARD DIVER and airplane.

MICHAEL is struggling to swim towards the COAST GUARD, where the harness is waiting for him.

QUICK CUT to MICHAEL

MICHAEL’S head falls beneath the surface of the water, and resurface. MICHAEL uses his last ounce of energy to propel him to the harness. MICHAEL, with the help of the COAST GUARD DIVER slides his head under and his left arm over the harness. COAST GUARD DIVER grabs on to the harness and the harness is hoisted up towards the airplane.

QUICK CUT TO holding area of airplane.

MICHAEL and RACHEL sit in the airplane hugging each other. RACHEL cries with relief as MICHAEL places her head on his shoulder. MICHAEL looks out of the back to see his beloved ship, The Goya, swirl in a circle and get devoured by the giant whirlpool below. As they fly away, MICHAEL sees the flickering lights as the Goya descends into the depths.

THE END